I’ve just finished the revisions to Part II of Alayne’s Story and gotten them uploaded. You can see the current draft over on this page.
As you can see, I added a new chapter earlier in the story. I also did a significant bit of reworking the early stages of Part II to make them a little less “bubble-gum and high school” and a little more “these are adults we’re talking about.” The rest of the story did not change too much aside from fixing spelling and grammatical errors.
And now, I’m taking a brief break before I get cracking on Part III!
