The Unexiled and The Progress Bars

I’ve had a few emails and questions come up about the fact that the progress bar for Alayne’s Story seems “stuck” at 100%. There’s a few reasons for that.

1) I post the updates on Fridays and generally don’t reset the progress bar until Saturday (I’m a lazy sot sometimes).
2) I have a strict routine on Saturdays of sleeping until 10 am, getting up, getting dressed, having a smoke, and then firing up the computer and working on things. I generally add a few pages to Alayne’s Story during this period. After lunch, I’ll finish working on things for my guild’s site, play some WoW, and then get back to writing.
3) I consider five pages added to be 100% for the week since my weekly updates are slightly over/under five pages.
4) By the time I finish writing on Saturday, I’ve generally added six or seven pages to Alayne’s Story. So, 100% done!

On The Unexiled: no, it’s not been forgotten. I’ve been working on it piecemeal as I found time between Alayne’s Story, raiding, work, and other projects. I’m happy to say that I just hit a major milestone on it and am at about the 60% mark. I’m planning to revisit my schedule a bit and work on Alayne’s Story on Saturday, The Unexiled on Sunday and alternate them during the week a bit. I generally don’t do too much writing during the week nowadays because of work and raiding.

Now, I’m not going to send out The Unexiled until it’s finished. But, I’ve decided to revamp my stance on it a bit and will send out copies to people who meet the following criteria:

1) Avid fantasy readers. And by “avid” I mean “voracious.”
2) Fluent in English (this will not apply for all native speakers).
3) Have some professional editing experience.

When I send it out, I’m going to be looking for a critical read. I’m going to be looking for people who can spot typos, grammar errors, and plot problems. Attached to the draft will be a glossary defining made-up words so that those are not marked as spelling errors unless they’re internally inconsistent (ex: E’lei’anshu is correct but El’eian’shu is a typo).

So, if you meet that criteria and are interested, keep an eye on the progress bar and on this space. When you see it hit 100% and you see a post that says “I finally finished the fucking thing!” shoot me an email with your proof of points 1, 2, and 3 and I’ll send you the draft after I finish my initial pass.

And now, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week begins the infiltration of the Twilight’s Hammer arc that will round out the Hyjal arc.

I’m currently writing the end of the next arc. I hope to have it finished over the weekend. I’ve been tracking the changes on the PTR and am wondering if and how I might work those in to the story later on. But, for now, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum.

And, I’m currently trying to track down a couple of people I know who are over in Hong Kong and Japan. It looks like the US mainland will not be getting evacuations (good, I have a lot of friends on the West Coast). Hawaii might be in trouble, though. Same for Australia (I know a few people there — mostly friends of friends, though). So, I’m going to go keep an eye out for that stuff and then I’ll get back to writing later on.

Guild progression is continuing apace with Causes Without Rebels. We could still use some more healers and DPS, though, so if any of you are looking to join an active raiding guild, check out the guild site and apply.

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forums. This week’s update takes us through the Gar’gol encounter in Hyjal and starts the build up for the next leg of the Return of the Ancients.

In other news, work continues apace on several projects. Which, I need to get back to so later!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forums. This week’s update unveils a little bit about Dar’ja’s past and kicks off the Return of the Ancients story arc in Mount Hyjal.

I have to say that Mount Hyjal is easily my favorite zone in Cataclysm. I was extremely disappointed with Vashjr and Uldum. Both had such great potiential but it was completely wasted, I felt. Uldum is still a fun zone — don’t get me wrong — but it’s too tacked-on to really flow with the rest of the expansion.

At any rate, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week carries on further with the Hyjal arc and goes a bit into some of what is going on with Dar’ja and Zerith.

Writing the arc with Dar’ja and Zerith has actually been quite entertaining — albeit somewhat challenging — for me. I’m hoping that it pans out well in the end.

In other news, I’ve fallen behind on my schedules this week due to a bought of bronchitis. I finally started getting my voice back today and am doing better…provided I don’t speak too much. Talking for more than a few seconds still sends me into a coughing fit that has me gasping when not puking.

And now, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forums. This week’s update kicks off the Hyjal story arc. This story arc is one of the first encountered in Cataclysm.

I’m currently planning to start playing through the lower level zones a good bit to see what “old world” lore has changed/been updated with Cataclysm. I know of a few arcs and twists I’d like to include in Part IV but I’ll need more information on them first.

And now, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forums. This week’s update begins covering what the cost of the Shattering was and prepares the group for their next stage: Mount Hyjal.

The Mount Hyjal arc is actually fairly interesting. There are so many divergent stories going on there. I much preferred it to Vashjr though the characters will be traveling there soonish. I’m slowly arcing the rest of Part IV out and waiting to see if I’m going to have to make any major revisions like I did for Call of the Crusade.

And now, back to work!

Way Too Much About…

Evolution, magic, and blood elven racial reproductive capacity.

Alternate Title: G has way too damned much free time.

Welcome back for Part II of this series meant to end the arguments once and for all over the age range I chose for my characters. In Part I I laid out the basis of the arguments and delved into the first reasons behind my belief that elves age at the same rate as humans and begin slowing once they have reached physical adulthood.

Now, we’re going to delve into why that’s not a problem in terms of reproduction.

But it would be if elves were able to have children at age 18 and they live to be 1000! A single elven woman could have over 400 children! That violates Rule #4!

Yeah, you’d think that. That would be true if elven women had the exact same fertility patterns as human women. However, they do not and cannot. Why? Because they do live longer.

In human women, fertility onsets shortly after menarche (menarche is the first time a girl experiences ovulation and her period). For elven women, they would experience this once shortly after their hormone levels put them past menarche (so, probably around 14 years of age). However, even in humans, a female is not “regularly” fertile straight after puberty begins. Her body may be, in theory, capable of childbearing and childbirth but the reality is that were you to take and impregnate a girl right after menarche, there’s a 7 in 10 chance she’ll miscarry. Why? Because her body is expending tremendous amounts of energy to transition from child to adult. It doesn’t have the chemical structures (yet) or the spare resources to nurture a fetus. The same would hold true for an elven woman.

Human females really only start to become regularly fertile a few years after menarche. This is generally around 13 to 15 years of age. Now, if an elven woman hits puberty at about the same age (12 years), she won’t really become “regular” until 14 to 16.

That is, if she followed the human pattern. Which, she won’t. She’s elven.

Okay, so how can elves mature at the same rate and not overbreed? Simple. Their fertility potential (the number of times they’ll ovulate before menopause) is the same as a human’s but spread out over a much longer period of time. It’s fairly simple when you think about it. At birth, any mammalian female is born with the maximum number of eggs she can have. She will not develop any more. So, that number sets an absolute bound on how many times she can successfully reproduce. In humans, after about age 15, you can estimate one egg released per month until about age 45. The human woman will also lose any eggs left unreleased as she ages into menopause.

So, recap: elven women and human women can have the same number of children (elven women are born with about the same number of eggs as a human woman) but elven women are adults for longer. If you posit that, on average, a human woman can have a maximum of 20 children, then you’ll see that elven women will, on average, have about the same upper bound. Elven women can just space births further apart is all.

Bah. Okay. So then how do elven women know when they’re fertile? Human women can tell (if you don’t already know this, go consult a biology textbook).

Since elven reproduction will, necessarily, depend on maximizing those few periods of active fertility over an elven woman’s lifespan, she needs some kind of signaling that she’s fertile. Otherwise, she (or her mate) might miss the opportunity and then have to wait decades for the next shot. So, for sin’dorei elves, I’ve developed something called the “sun change.” Since they’re pretty obsessed with the sun, I figured it’d make a nice contrast to the normal lunar patterns.

I posit that when a blood elf woman becomes fertile, much like her human counterpart, she releases pheromones and experiences an increase in libido and nesting. The pheromones will cause any males around her to be rather…distracted…and will help her successfully mate and reproduce during the infrequent windows of active fertility.

I base this conjecture largely off human mating patterns in females and in seasonal mating patterns among animals that do not experience monthly fertility (deer, dogs, cats, etc).

Okay…but what about rule #2? Isn’t it kind of obvious?

Yes and no. It’s obvious to us because, well, we live a grand total of 100 years max. Imagine if you could live to be 1000. Would you be so worried about pursuing mating opportunities if you thought you would have plenty of time to do so later?

A lot of people think that longer lived races would mate more like seasonal mammals (ex: the Irda from Dragonlance). However, I’ve never quite been able to wrap my mind around why a sentient race would not avoid reproduction if they’re so logical and able to use reason or magic to override the desire imperative. I mean, the act of sexual intercourse is a time and energy consuming act. That’s at least one hour per fertile period that is “wasted.” If your race is going to live to be 1000 and you allow them the magic or the logic to ignore the imperative to reproduce — they’ll go extinct pretty damned quickly.

Think I’m lying? Go check out the demographics for the modern Western world and get back to me. Go look at the falling fertility rates caused by delayed reproduction in western women. Go look at the falling live birth rates, the rising average age of population, and then, if you really want to scare yourself, try totaling up the projected tax rates required to fund entitlement programs by a population that is quickly contracting.

Done?

Now, back to explaining why rule #2 is important. If having sexual intercourse were not an extremely pleasant experience — one that a person would want to repeat often regardless of the energy/time input — then the race would not do it. They would die out and you’d have nothing. In the modern west, we’ve made parenting (the act of raising children) so expensive, so fraught with peril, and so energy-consuming that people are, quite rationally, opting out entirely! The only thing surprising about this is that anyone is shocked at all.

So, for elves, having sex is great. With a medieval level of technology, elven women are not able to perfectly control or suppress their fertility (a few tricks might be known but they’ll have a high failure rate). With the sin’dorei just recovering from a devastating war that cost them 80% of their adult population, they need every woman reproducing early and often so the parenting cost has been lowered, the bar for marriage has been lowered, and the government is actively encouraging things it would not have considered a century ago.

Adapt and survive. NOTHING gets around it.

Check back next time for the explanation of how magic can’t be used to explain everything and why even magical explanations must be internally consistent.

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forums. This week’s update brings the goblins into play.

Writing goblin points-of-view has actually been kind of tricky for me. I’ve set myself several rather difficult challenges with Part IV and the goblins are one of them. I’m still working on smoothing them into the story without causing too many conflicts between their inherent personalities and the personalities of the main cast.

Speaking of the cast — I’m working on updating the Cast of Characters page with some of the recurring characters like Tau’re, Tam’ara, Jez’ral, and Mir’el.

Anyhow, back to work!