Time Gaps…Why I Use Them Even If I Hate Them

Time Gaps...Why I Use Them Even If I Hate Them

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I think my #1 pet peeve in some works is time gaps. You get to know one group of characters and then, bam, you’re 4000 years later with a whole new bunch to learn. Sometimes, this tool (I hesitate to call it that) can be used effectively. Brandon Sanderson does it quite well in The Way of Kings and Robert Jordan really got you drawn into The Eye of the World with a prologue that takes place 3000 years before the story proper. However, with some other authors, it’s clear that it was just a crutch to cover the fact that they didn’t want to actually build up their characters and do a proper transition.

In Twilight of Lanar’ya I do have several time gaps. I wanted to set the prologue in the early days of the Empire and then show how Andral was coping with being an elf flung into a human world. I also wanted to show events that would be referenced in Jarl’s life but without having to create a monster-sized book. So, I used time gaps. The characters I used the gaps with were all built up either before or after the gap so I didn’t fall into the “I didn’t want to develop characters” trap but I did feel somewhat guilty about how often I was using time gaps.

Well, I’m hitting a point in Midnight of Lanar’ya where there’s going to be a bit of a gap. I’m in the homestretch for writing the first draft and if I can just sit down this weekend, undisturbed, and get some serious work crunched on it, I will definitely have the first draft finished by the end of this month.

Still, I hate using time gaps within a book. A gap between books is okay. A gap within better have a damned good reason for being there or else I’m going to need some sort of strong signal that “A Lot Of Time Has Passed.”

Anyhow, I’d best get back to working on Midnight of Lanar’ya. Apparently a bunch of people have finished Twilight of Lanar’ya and are bugging me to finish the next book already because they want to know what’s going on.

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

Latest Update Posted

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week’s update takes the characters through the Al’Akir encounter and finishes out the Uldum arc.

I did not get any work done on Alayne’s Story this week due to injuring my back over the previous weekend. However, I will be finishing it up within the next couple of weeks, giving myself more time to work on Midnight of Lanar’ya.

And now, back to work!

Latest Update Posted

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week’s update takes the characters through the rest of Vortex Pinnacle and through the Council of Winds encounter in the Throne of the Four Winds.

I’ve also just finished up the Dragon Soul section of the Hour of Twilight arc and am working on the wind-down for the Epilogue. Now that the finish line is in sight, I’m feeling a little melancholic about Alayne’s Story. Still, I know it’s time to end it for now and focus on my other writing. I’ve just published my first novel (more info at my author blog) and I’m nearly finished with draft one of the second book, Midnight of Lanar’ya. So, I’ll have plenty of writing projects to occupy me but Alayne’s Story will always have a very special place in my heart as being my first publicly-viewed long work.

And now, back to work!

Adventures in Self-Publishing Part III — Formatting: Why Must Everyone Want Different Formats?

Adventures in Self-Publishing Part III -- Formatting: Why Must Everyone Want Different Formats?

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

So, having finished my first publishable novel and decided to self-publish, everything should have been simple. I just upload the files, find someone to do the cover and the maps, and then push a button and it’s all done, right? Right?

Ha. I wish.

Finding a cover artist was simple. I talked with my friend Daniel and he recommended Keary Taylor. I checked her out, liked what I saw, and contacted her. We went through a few rounds before we had a cover that was awesome.

I spoke with several people about maps and finally got my friend John-Paul Gorgoroso to tackle that issue. Once I had the maps in hand, it was time to upload.

And it was time to start playing the “Will It Work” drinking game.

Uploading to CreateSpace was simple. I selected the file, uploaded it, did the interior check, uploaded the cover, and ordered a proof. I did wind up having to make some formatting revisions to the first proof but the second came out perfect. It helped tremendously that CreateSpace provided a pre-formatted document. All I had to do was copy my text in to it, keep the formatting from the CreateSpace document, fix a few things here and there, and then, voilà, I was done.

Uploading to Smashwords, on the other hand, was not so simple. First I had to read their guide. I opted to read the HTML version in my browser so I could bookmark and browse between sections as needed. However, most of their anchors didn’t actually go anywhere. Then, even after I had meticulously followed all of the steps, their MeatGrinder still couldn’t handle having a first paragraph intent at the start of each chapter and it kept throwing my dividers out of alignment. After a few hours of growling, cursing, and wishing the MeatGrinder could at least tell me which friggin’ page the problem was on, I managed to get a workable draft uploaded and ran a quick check on it.

Then I had to repeat the process for Amazon Kindle since Amazon doesn’t automatically accept the requests from Smashwords.

By the time I had waged and won (barely) the formatting war, my head was spinning and I was wondering just why I had thought this would be a good idea to begin with.

Stay tuned for Part IV: Planning a Marketing Campaign!

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

Adventures In Publishing Part II — Agent, Agent Where Art Thou? Eh, Screw It — Self-Publishing!

Adventures In Publishing Part II -- Agent, Agent Where Art Thou? Eh, Screw It -- Self-Publishing!

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

Finishing Twilight of Lanar’ya took me about three months total from start to completion. So, by August 2011, I had a fairly final draft ready. I just needed to fine tune a few areas of it and then I’d be ready to publish. So, I did what all writers who don’t know better do.

I started looking for an agent. (Even Neil Gaiman thinks it’s a bit of a waste of time).

If I knew then what I know now, I’d have saved myself the hassle and published a hell of a lot sooner. But, I was hung up on going the traditional route. I felt confident in my work and knew that the market had matured a good bit. I felt that I was easily better than some of the junk filling up bookshelves (Twilight, anyone?) and that I was on par with other big author’s earliest works. Certainly my writing had benefited from reading a lot. I don’t have the hubris to say I’m as good as Terry Goodkind or Terry Brooks but I do think I’m at least as good as some of the early stuff from Dragonlance (back when the world of Krynn was still being formed and the authors kept writing themselves into corners).

I sent Twilight of Lanar’ya to about fifty different agents. I heard back from about half of them. Mostly rejections, of course, because publishers are iffy about taking on new talent with it being so easy to self-publish and to distribute online. Plenty of bookstores and closing up shop for lack of customers and inability to compete against Amazon. Almost all the rejections I had acknowledged that my book was 1) well-written, 2) interesting, and 3) had potential but it’s gotten damned hard to sell a trilogy from a new name and, as I said, publishers are becoming very risk averse.

I did hear back a couple of tentative offers but nothing that I really liked on follow-up. Basically, if I was going to have to do all the marketing and negotiate the deals with bookstores myself and the publisher was just going to print a run and then charge me for it, why not just self-publish instead? At least with a print-on-demand service, I don’t have to worry about a publishing house playing games with the numbers until I have to take them to court to get my royalties the way Peter Jackson had to take New Line to court to get paid for The Fellowship of the Ring (which, according to Movie Industry Magic Math, did rather poorly). Perhaps big publishing houses don’t do this, but then, if I’m going to be doing all the footwork myself with no help, why should I get substantially less money than I would if I went indie?

So, I started looking into self-publishing.

My friend and fellow author, Daniel A. Kaine, had self-published his book, Daeva: Dawn of Darkness and so I went to him for advice. He gave me a few pointers and so off I went.

Now, lest anyone think self-publishing is easy, let me be blunt and say it’s not. Self-publishing is definitely not for the faint of heart. Self-publishing requires that you be your own editor, your own proofreader, your own marketing department, and your own format specialist. It requires that you study the market and the trends and that you set your prices according to what the cost of print-on-demand for your work is and how much of a royalty you need. A few people have gotten fantastically wealthy from self-publishing but, for the most part, the vast majority of us will not be able to quit our day jobs.

So, having decided to self-publish, I had climbed one mountain only to find a whole range of the things in front of me…

Check back in a few days for Part III of this saga — Why Formatting Is The Bane Of My Existence.

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

Latest Update Posted

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week’s update takes the characters through the Vortex Pinnacle encounters on their way to face off against Al’Akir.

I’m currently writing up the last encounter in Dragon Soul and should be starting on the final chapters soon. Then comes the Epilogue to round it out.

I’m hearing more about the storyline for Pandaria and may actually buy it (still very undecided) but I am not going to take my characters through it in Alayne’s Story. I’ve decided that it’s for the best that the story end here for a time.

And now, off to work!

Adventures in Publishing: Part I — The Kick In The Rear

Adventures in Publishing: Part I -- The Kick In The Rear

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My adventure in getting published started many years ago when I was in college. I had written my first novel Prophecies of Atlantis and, having won a few awards for my short stories, figured that getting published would be a cinch. After all, I knew I could write well — I had some shiny awards to show for it and several of my professors telling me that I was a good writer. So, full of confidence in a way only a twenty-year-old can be, I sent my query letters and copies of Prophecies off, figuring I’d have a contract and be set for life.

Instead, I started up a rather impressive collection of rejection letters.

These were the days before Peter Jackson brought fantasy more into the mainstream with his adaptation of J.R.R. Tolkien’s Lord of the Ring trilogy. This was long before J.K. Rowling made it acceptable for parents to let their children read books about magic and wizards. This was back when Dragonlance was still something of a cult community and WoTers were considered eccentric.

So, I got rejected. A lot.

Looking back now, Prophecies deserved to get rejected. It was a good long story for someone who hadn’t seen the better part of life. But, the characters were very juvenile, the plot was rather bland, and my ambitions had far out-paced my skill or discipline at that point in my life. Still, getting rejected isn’t easy and, in those days (and even today) no one really bothers to tell you why.

So, I sucked it up and focused more on writing D&D campaigns, designing NWN levels and campaigns, attempting to write a MUD, and then just doing walk-throughs and guides for various Final Fantasy games.

I started working on a recurrent project around this time as well. Heart’s Flame was popular on various message boards I hung out at but then, I’m afraid it was probably something of the echo-chamber effect. In time, I moved to France, got married, found a job, and quit writing Heart’s Flame. I was focused on advancing my “real” career and just figured that, hey, I could do some short stories and all but I’d never get published by the majors. Fantasy fiction was just too “out there” and I had no good ideas for general fiction titles.

In 2007, I started writing a short fanfic set in World of Warcraft about my characters. Alayne’s Story got me a good bit of attention within the WoW EU community and I had a lot of positive feedback. I wound up starting a website for it over at www.magisters-terrace.com and even got the idea for a book called The Unexiled. However, juggling work, Alayne’s Story, and The Unexiled meant that one of the three was going to lose out. I had (at the time) a fairly sizeable fanbase for Alayne’s Story. Also, the more I worked on The Unexiled, the more I saw I needed to do background work on the universe it was set in. That led to a project I’m still tinkering with but am nowhere near ready to announce.

The years passed by. Then, in May 2011, I had a solid kick to the rear that got me to finally write something I could publish. See, in May 2011, I was told that my position at work was going the way of the dodo. I tried to find other jobs where I was but the demand for English-speakers in France is just not that high and I kept getting told “your writing skill isn’t good enough” for damned near anything I applied for.

“Not a good enough writer, eh?” I said to myself on one of many sleepless nights. I’d seen some of what passed muster for “good” in those areas and wondered if I’d entered the Twilight Zone where “good” meant “sparkly vampires who go to high school.” I’d had the idea for the Fall of the Lanarian Empire series germinating in my head for some time at that point. “Not good enough? Well, there’s more than one way to support myself. Hell with it, I’m not sleeping now anyways. Might as well get some writing done. Not good enough? Pshaw: did they read some of the utter shite out there?”

Adversity is a great motivator in my life. If you want to see me do my best, put me under pressure. The process itself may not be pretty but you’re going to get a diamond out of it. 😉

So, mildly ticked off, I fired up Word and started writing — which is always Step 1 in Getting Published.

Stop by later this week for Part II — Finish The Damned Thing Already And Find An Agent (or why you shouldn’t bother with the second part).

Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale in paperback (CreateSpace and Amazon) and eBook (Smashwords and Amazon).

Latest Update Posted

Latest Update Posted

I’ve just posted the latest update to Alayne’s Story over on the WoW RP forum. This week’s update takes the characters the rest of the way through the Halls of Origination and puts us about half-way through the Uldum arc.

I’m down to the last few encounters in Dragon Soul and should have the writing done in a few weeks. Also, if you didn’t see it below, I have just published my first novel. I’m ridiculously proud of that. I’ll probably be saying “OMG. I’m on Amazon!” for the rest of the day. Everyone around me is going to know that I finally got my novel published. I hope I don’t annoy too many people with the continual awestruck realizations…

And now, back to work!

Twilight of Lanar’ya Now Available!

Twilight of Lanar'ya Now Available!

After so many years of writing things that would have been awesome had they only seen the light of day (other writers will know what I mean), it is with great pride and excitement that I announce that Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale at CreateSpace and Amazon.com in paperback or at Smashwords in eBook format! It will be available in the Amazon Kindle store within the next 24 hours.

If you are ordering the paperback edition, I do prefer that you go through CreateSpace for that as I do get a larger royalty payment from them than from Amazon. Also, the reason for the $10 price on the paperback is that the manufacturing costs came up to $8.00 USD. Otherwise, it would be selling for $5.00 USD if I could swing it.

I will post about the various adventures I’ve had actually getting this thing published later. For now, I’m going to go celebrate!





Thanks to everyone who has stood by me while I got this thing written and published. Thanks to my parents, my illustrators, Keary and John-Paul, to my beta readers, and to all my friends out there. I did it guys. I finally did it.

Twilight of Lanar’ya Now Available!

Twilight of Lanar'ya Now Available!

After so many years of writing things that would have been awesome had they only seen the light of day (other writers will know what I mean), it is with great pride and excitement that I announce that Twilight of Lanar’ya is now on sale at CreateSpace and Amazon.com in paperback or at Smashwords in eBook format! It will be available in the Amazon Kindle store within the next 24 hours. Edit: Now available for Kindle here.

If you are ordering the paperback edition, I do prefer that you go through CreateSpace for that as I do get a larger royalty payment from them than from Amazon. Also, the reason for the $10 price on the paperback is that the manufacturing costs came up to $8.00 USD. Otherwise, it would be selling for $5.00 USD if I could swing it.

I will post about the various adventures I’ve had actually getting this thing published later. For now, I’m going to go celebrate!





Thanks to everyone who has stood by me while I got this thing written and published. Thanks to my parents, my illustrators, Keary and John-Paul, to my beta readers, and to all my friends out there. I did it guys. I finally did it.